You have potential.
YOu have great potential and the graphics were good. The voice actors are horrible though and sound like there about 7 years old. XD
The plot wasn't that funny either if that's what you were trying to achieve. It was alright. I think the plot was just badly put together and most of the voice acting was timed badly. Good work none the less. If you work in those area's you can expect a great flash in the future.